Saturday, October 6, 2012

Broken Old Ghost Comments

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He's an old man now
with fond memories of long gone fishing trips.
He sees France and Germany in his dreams
and recalls the sweet taste of a young frauleins lips.
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Smoky Hoss
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Kim Barney 02 April 2020

I love this poem, Smoky. I feel like a broken old ghost myself right now. I will be featuring this poem and some of your others in Puzzle Master Quiz 055, to be posted in a few days. The current quiz is 051.

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Valerie Dohren 11 October 2012

Sorry about the word jumble - its supposed to read: The story of a life.... this iPad has a mind of its own! !

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Valerie Dohren 08 October 2012

Thenatory of a life well lived I guess - great write Smoky.

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Dave Walker 07 October 2012

Heart breaking and heart warming at the same time, A really fantastic poem.

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Eric Cockrell 06 October 2012

and this one strikes a familiar chord.... you paint the pictures of life very well!

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