Wednesday, February 16, 2022

Broken Objects Comments

Rating: 4.9

Sunny and her love-object have broken up.

It was a selfie-inflicted wound - a slapdash pic taken,
that like a puzzle, revealed more than intended.
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 17 February 2022

superbly completed; the last line is interesting assumption

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 February 2022

"Our lives are written in disappearing ink"…. Marvellous phrase. Beautiful and poetic…top score

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David Wood 16 February 2022

We ar all actors on the world stage where drama plays through several acts, some romantic, some sad, some happy but not many bad.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 February 2022

What was wrong with the selfie? Some lines that I liked: 1. 'Perfectly nice people are capable of unfaithful deeds',2. 'It's not as if all kisses are meaningful'.3. 'We stretch for happiness or for fleeting pleasure'. Nice poem!

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anais vionet 16 February 2022

Someone took a selfie and Sunny could be seen kissing someone in the background.. eeekkk!

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