Friday, July 1, 2011

Broken Nights Comments

Rating: 3.5

Broken nights, and shattered daylight
A dream stole my heart, while toddler's feet wobbled,
Now trapped in a world I dont understand
That laughs when I say my mind is troubled
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Kendzi Samuel
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Antonio Liao 19 July 2011

A Voltage V in the making living in a poetry of rhyme....this is one of the most powerful poem about Life in action...God bless and a 10 +++

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Antonio Liao 19 July 2011

A Voltage V in the making living in a poetry of rhyme....this is one of the most powerful poem about Life in action...God bless and a 10 +++

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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