Sunday, October 18, 2015

Broken Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beauty of another morning, broken only by inner grief,
not wanting to talk, feeling an intense silence filling
my being with it's deepened emptiness.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Khairul Ahsan 19 October 2015

The melancholy has touched my heart. It runs very, very deep. Few can express their sadness so eloquently. You are indeed on top of those. Cheer up, my friend! Another morning will definitely come. 10/10.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 19 October 2015

True love is undying. Likewise these illustrious verses are eternal and chaste; but agonizing when the loved one is no more. Every word has adoration, devotion expanded with a yearning of being alone without the loved one. Beautiful flow of lyrics, painful to read; as it strokes one with an heart ache

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Jaishree Nair 18 October 2015

Grief of unreturned love well penned Thanks for sharing

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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