Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Broken Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.9

I really Miss, My broken Mirror
It's like having a Black empty Space
I have bought a new one, much Clearer
I thought I would see a new Face
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David Darbyshire
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Joy Vanderhelm 25 January 2006

I like the helpless inevitability of fate this poem represents. The delivery is amusing well done.

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Joseph Daly 30 November 2005

Excellent David, Says to me that you fear change; about yourself? Or generally? Me I welcome change for the better. Obviously it must be great as Liz posted twice.

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Liz Munro 30 November 2005

Very funny- i needed the laugh 10/10 Liz.

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Liz Munro 30 November 2005

Very funny- i needed the laugh 10/10 Liz.

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