Friday, September 19, 2008

'Broken Mirror' Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked into my room and slammed the door
The mirror fell onto the floor
So frustrated, I my head shook
I turned around to give it a look
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Whitney Nicole Albright*
COMMENTS
Christine Kerr 28 June 2009

Beautifully written Whitney, Breaking a mirror can show the inside of your soul so vividly. Your wording was straight from the heart.10++

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You write with the voice of a true poet in this poem...

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 11 October 2008

Fabulous. The last line goes so deep...... Really a masterpiece. Thank you very much.

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Asif Andalib 26 September 2008

A masterpiece. I am falling in love with your poems.10

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