Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Broken Mirror Comments

Rating: 3.8

A mirror was accidentely
broken
shattered into hundreds
of pieces
...
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Heather Burns
COMMENTS
Smoky Hoss 01 September 2013

I do very much like the feel of this poem, it has the spirit of Imagist poetry all through it. Very intriguing!

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Ramesh Rai 29 August 2013

i like to compare the broken mirror with that of broken heart n the consequence thereof. a beautiful write.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 August 2013

Event brought us at the desert.... yeah here u r Heather thank you

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Poetheart Morgan 28 August 2013

Full of symbolism in few words. The mirror, the crystal that broken (i presume) , the lost heart, the lost identity....

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Neela Nath Das 28 August 2013

I loved the brevity of expression and the theme also.

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Jesse Ellsbury 28 August 2013

I like your line breaks and dropped lines. The broken phrases really echo and portray the theme in a very effective way. Well done!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 August 2013

Sand is where the mirror came from. To sand it goes. One single piece. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Beautiful poem..If broken leaves one shattered never to be mended..Loved reading it. Thank you Heather for the Inspiring comments that fills positivity in me...Thanks a lot.

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David Wood 28 August 2013

Mirrors show us who we really are. Have you read my poem Mirror?

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