Tuesday, August 11, 2020

Broken Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.5

It slipped
The mirror
Through my hands
And shattered
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Suresh Kumar EK
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Rajan T Renganathan 11 May 2023

Pieces of broken mirror is painful to so with the heart only difference is you may get wounds on your hand with the other on the head....

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C N Premkumar 15 January 2022

Beautiful poem. Expressions are really different like the broken mirror. A novel concept.

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 December 2021

True, so very true! A broken heart to reflects, charmed in a ray of hope! What mirror?

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And the shattered glass made many pieces to reflect a hundred images

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Susan Williams 30 December 2020

NO VIBGYOR No frameworks. But it reflects My too many faces-------------------Fantastic writing. no colors of the rainbow, but too much hypocrisy---- that is striking the chords of the readers' heart. top marks on this write!

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Prasana Mp 27 December 2020

THE BROKEN MIRROR reflects the light of poetry

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Luo Zhihai 21 December 2020

A ray of hope like mirror broken!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2020

A brilliant poem with great philosophocal intensity... admired and appreciated! 5 stars

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Prasana Mp 09 November 2020

A poem with beautiful images

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Prasana Mp 01 November 2020

A ray ofhope An array of hope The broken mirror is a powerful image

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Bri Edwards 22 October 2020

2 - line 7 " show" ? well, " show" could apply here, but i wonder if you meant " shower" ok, i see the topic is " philosophy" . NO WONDER some of it did not 'compute' well in my feeble mind! line 17 " broken" ? I like " Disgust and trust." ...and " A ray of hope An array of hope." Well, how long then? bri :)

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Bri Edwards 22 October 2020

1 - " ROYGBIV or Roy G. Biv is an acronym for the sequence of hues commonly described as making up a rainbow: red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo and violet. The initialism is sometimes referred to in reverse order, as VIBGYOR." (cont.)

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Prasana Mp 21 October 2020

poem with apt images OF LIFE AND DEATH GREAT WORK

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Anitha k. 15 October 2020

Broken mirror, which I like most......... .....Thank you so much for this brilliant thought.

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P A Noushad 15 October 2020

Lovely woven verses.

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Prasana Mp 10 October 2020

Great poem. the image of The mirror May be life Or love. Thanks Suresh for sharing this exceptional poem

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Prasana Mp 09 October 2020

super poem full of imageries of life and death

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Kesav Easwaran 06 October 2020

Love lost more often makes one philosophic. Genuine feelings there. Good write

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Lovely lines that are both creative and compelling! Well done my friend!

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Soran M. H 02 October 2020

This brilliant and philosophical poem reflects the poet’s fate in a foggy reality, an unforgiving reality that breaks hearts with a dream. Here, he uses the mirror as a strong symbol that gives strength and additional value to this good poem.5 stars with kind regards

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Suresh Kumar EK

Suresh Kumar EK

Kerala, India
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