It slipped
The mirror
Through my hands
And shattered
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Beautiful poem. Expressions are really different like the broken mirror. A novel concept.
True, so very true! A broken heart to reflects, charmed in a ray of hope! What mirror?
And the shattered glass made many pieces to reflect a hundred images
NO VIBGYOR No frameworks. But it reflects My too many faces-------------------Fantastic writing. no colors of the rainbow, but too much hypocrisy---- that is striking the chords of the readers' heart. top marks on this write!
A brilliant poem with great philosophocal intensity... admired and appreciated! 5 stars
A ray ofhope An array of hope The broken mirror is a powerful image
2 - line 7 " show" ? well, " show" could apply here, but i wonder if you meant " shower" ok, i see the topic is " philosophy" . NO WONDER some of it did not 'compute' well in my feeble mind! line 17 " broken" ? I like " Disgust and trust." ...and " A ray of hope An array of hope." Well, how long then? bri :)
1 - " ROYGBIV or Roy G. Biv is an acronym for the sequence of hues commonly described as making up a rainbow: red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo and violet. The initialism is sometimes referred to in reverse order, as VIBGYOR." (cont.)
Broken mirror, which I like most......... .....Thank you so much for this brilliant thought.
Great poem. the image of The mirror May be life Or love. Thanks Suresh for sharing this exceptional poem
Love lost more often makes one philosophic. Genuine feelings there. Good write
Lovely lines that are both creative and compelling! Well done my friend!
This brilliant and philosophical poem reflects the poet’s fate in a foggy reality, an unforgiving reality that breaks hearts with a dream. Here, he uses the mirror as a strong symbol that gives strength and additional value to this good poem.5 stars with kind regards
Pieces of broken mirror is painful to so with the heart only difference is you may get wounds on your hand with the other on the head....