Sunday, November 16, 2014

Broken Mirror Comments

Rating: 5.0

With a sudden gush of air, the mirror, hanging on the wall
Was broken into hundreds of pieces.

Collecting all and uniting them back in the frame
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Amitava Sur
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Sanchita Julka 19 February 2018

Hi, really can relate to this one, and you have penned the realisation in a ver beautiful and lucid way. Do read my poems and share your views. Poems by Sagarika julka

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Loke Kok Yee 27 September 2015

In a comfort zone there is little need for us to have a different view, sometimes it takes a crisis before we can see things from another perspective. Very well presented and a smooth read. Thanks

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Roseann Shawiak 23 July 2015

Amitava, just had to come back and read this poem again, it is truly reflective and has made quite an impression on my mind. Your insight is impeccable, honest and straightforward. Very humbling as it is thought about. Thank you for showing us how to see ourselves as others see us. RoseAnn

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Allotey Abossey 09 June 2015

It fascinating how you came about with this piece. It's beautiful and I love it.

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Uma Ram 29 April 2015

Good piece of self evaluation sir. Yes only a mirror can reflect our true self sans artificiality...Thanks for sharing...please do read my poems AWAITING MIRACLES AND THE MANGO TREE...Thanks for reviewing my poem The Creator's laughter

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 April 2015

Poem with a beautiful message... Helping me to be cautious enough To analyze and correct myself. Broken pieces of mirror reflected images in different ways. Powerful presentation. Loved reading.

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Jitesh Shah 20 March 2015

very nice poem sir, i like it

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Tony Adah 02 January 2015

A. Sur, we all find our shadows in a broken mirror. Nicely penned n thanks for sharing

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Tony Adah 02 January 2015

A. Sur, we all find our shadows in a broken mirror. Nicely penned n thanks for sharing

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Tushar Ray 16 December 2014

This is a beautiful poem with a unique plot which the poet chooses to portray himself through different reflections of him as a tool for self-analysis. I very much like the rhythm flowing through the unique self-analysis with gestures. It was very enjoyable.

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Lyn Paul 28 November 2014

Wonderful words you have pieced together. Thank you and Cheers to 200 poems.

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Unwritten Soul 24 November 2014

Fantastic idea, I like how u birth it in a delicate way.... Keep writing great

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Ramesh Rai 24 November 2014

I don't find any difference between a broken mirror and broken heart. Both are same. We see our face in mirror and similarly we see our face in other's heart. Beautifully penned with an Springe thought.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 22 November 2014

This is very outstanding......broken mirror exhibits broken images of self.......rather a testing time for a broken man to remain steadfast and quiet despite being downhearted and saddened.....though a time for self-introspection .........very insightful indeed....10/10

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 November 2014

A poem to ponder on... the various aspects of the human being. Great!

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Akhtar Jawad 18 November 2014

Conscience is our snapper. It has our so many pictures that are merged in one. When it is broken its pieces take us to pieces and we see so many of our images, some are beautiful and some are ugly. A nice write............10

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Valsa George 18 November 2014

Excellent..... I must say! There are a hundred faces for us..... malevolent and benign! But we never try to see them or fail to perceive them in their sheer nakedness! We have to learn to look at ourselves as others see us! A very insightful poem Amitava!

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Salini Nair 18 November 2014

beautiful....enjoyed this well crafted poem....great work

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Alesia Leach 17 November 2014

Very insightful how we see ourselves. Well written! ; 0)

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Marieta Maglas 17 November 2014

Beautiful poem, Enjoyed reading it. Voted 10.

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