Tuesday, December 18, 2012

Broken Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.3

broken mirror, broken mirror
scattered on the floor
consist of thousand faces
from our life pieces
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adheez van der beanthz
COMMENTS
Elena Plotkin 27 August 2013

Very mesmeric. Very well done.

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

a shattered mirror cannot be put back together again. akk is lost good write

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Shereen Ramadan 15 August 2013

i liked your repetition of 'broken mirror'

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Imelda Ortega Suzara 11 August 2013

Is it broken by someone who does not like their own face and image?

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Arabella Picken 07 August 2013

I like the repetition of 'broken mirror' - it re-instates what you want known. Good write

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Chandra Thiagarajan 19 December 2012

This is the first time I have read your poem.I feel it enshrouds a philosophy which is really deep.

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Vijay Sai R 19 December 2012

your mirror reflects a lot. well done

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Kelvin Owusu 18 December 2012

An interesting piece, nicely structured a good write

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