Thursday, February 2, 2012

Broken Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.2

The two sides of mirror
One side I stand alone
Other side I see myself alone!
Who am I really?
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Deep Mukherjee
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Shivani Gupta 18 August 2012

A good one.......nicely written

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Nitijita Mishra 06 July 2012

wow....b'fl thought..

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Indira Babbellapati 04 June 2012

this question 'who am i' can lead u gain greater insights to write with maturity...go on!

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Soulful Heart 21 February 2012

The one who writes, Or the one who puts thoughts so beautifully alive........... :)

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Hazelyn Usop 08 February 2012

i love your poem it open up my eyes for something that i haven't given attention lately....thnxs

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 February 2012

Deep Mukherjee, As long the mirror reflects what we do, we will stand out as the true person with complex characters. Do not get perplexed. Nice to read your comments and poems..

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Kaitlin Schmidt 05 February 2012

I can definitely relate to this poem. Finding ourselves is something we all struggle with. I liked how your represented both side of yourself. And choosing to stay true yourself is all you can do in this chaotic and obstructive world. Great job!

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Tiffany Cooper 05 February 2012

wow it is a great poem! ! !

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Rachelle Firman 04 February 2012

I am none of the above I am the mirror after it is broken inside out never to be replaced and forever trapped in this painful world

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Life Goes On 04 February 2012

The one who smiles Or the one who pretends? The one who asks Or the one who listens? One who searches answers Or the one stands perplexed? One who stands strong Or one Who's breaking down? Or am I the mirror? wonderful thoughts

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Sujina Sudhakar 04 February 2012

Good Work..! :) A thoughtful poem.

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MRITYUNJAY JHA 02 February 2012

Beautiful, because of the dialectical projection of the speaker's persona.. Ambiguity leads to Realization! WHAT ELSE IS LEFT IN UR POEM? It is Nothing! Nothing! And, ......... Silence! Very Promising Talent you hv, Mr.Deep Mukherjee! Thank u!

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Francis Tikava 02 February 2012

Very Nice poem. Could you read mine?

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Dave Walker 02 February 2012

A really wonderful poem, like it. A great write.

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this is very good. i will be reading more of your poems

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