Broken Love Comments

'your eyes drown mines...not sentimentally'. I love these two lines. good job!

really good! ! i like your work also and thank you XD

The gentle flow and rhyming in this poem is a delight. Well done. Irene

i really love this poem! please keep writing :)

Well written - good question...how does one know what the other thinks...will watch your work.

this is a nice poem, i like it alot true feelings man! ! ! keep up the good work.

I like this.. the great thing bout love is that there is always more people out there for you... always keep your head held high! ! ! ! Love this piece... *(*_*) *

i really liked this one... good work =)