Friday, August 7, 2009

Broken Love Comments

Rating: 2.8

The love that was once there, isn't there anymore
The life that was once there, isn't there anymore
Broken promises, a broken heart
The spoken words, the unspoken words
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Shannon Lasater
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Sonia Hernandez 22 September 2009

wow you go girl! thats really good and just like ur new poem these words

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Reshma Ramesh 14 September 2009

heat felt write.............well done

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Dorota Szumilas 11 August 2009

Broken love like a broken day. Day like a love. Everybody need one and another. To live. It isn't nice but true. Very interested title of this poem, and all too.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 August 2009

Like a broken arrow that pierces right to your fractured heart, its no longer a bittersweet kind of affair, but a gravely encounter.

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Shannon Lasater

Shannon Lasater

Omaha, Nebraska
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