Saturday, November 22, 2008

Broken Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dimmer than ever does life now feel.
Emotions so tender, so soft and surreal.
Fevers of winter sprout in the spring.
My heart needs a song while there's nothing to sing.
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Alicia Gordon
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Soumia Benmechiche 14 March 2009

Very nice and good discription of a love situation.I gave you a ten

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Very nice rhyme al the way through and in the heart the diamond is made-you could some of y love poems and let me what you think.some of mine were put to music by my brother.A ten from me.

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Nikki Clevenger 23 November 2008

I really liked this poem, speaks very true of a broken heart. Very beautirful words in this one.

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