Broken Lives Rising; Rebirth Phoenix Ashes Comments

The phoenix rising from the ashes to live for a thousand years is a theme which I wrote about, but not so convincingly as this.

I am in another place another time, should have stayed in Indonesia, it suited me more, but was time to move on; the reasons for moving were pressing; these themes can be found in several extant early New Zealand poems, instantly 6 or 7 spring to mind, but you have already read them Miroslavia. Of the many which partly approach such themes I guess 'Foolmoon', 'Nights Of Dusty Roads', 'Echo Of Paradise Lost', 'Stars Burn At The Brightest', 'Finally Fulfilled', 'Remembrance' have a few of these inlaid concepts before a few later classical pieces more in this writing style.

I sense a style closing with classic notes :) so unlike you still terry filtered. Wonderful poem.

into embodied flesh living in other times other dimensions times into newborn births concluded in very sharp and elegant one_Soul