Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Broken Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I always lie,
Lie about my home, Lie about my insanity,
I always being alone for all this year,
Don't know why, no one can't bring me home,
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Kaede Rirunaru
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Anjali Sinha 16 December 2008

awh im so touchhhhhhhhhed --your broken life dont lose hope God is there--believe in him a nice write --A++++++ anjali

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Joseph Poewhit 12 December 2008

We all have things in our lives

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 December 2008

if we can believe in God, life is much easier to go through. interesting poem! keep writing!

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Min Sia 09 December 2008

Expressive poem..there's hatred..yet there's still hope sleeping within.. Wonderful words! Great write!

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Kite Remedy 09 December 2008

life sure is hard, but that's why we also have hope, right? expressive poem..

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Aijaz Asif 09 December 2008

a very beautiful write with lots of pain and yearings...in the end hope to be every thing right again....keep on holding the sring of hope, like i do, and soon you'll find happiness...thanks for sharing 10++++++ and A+++++++ rgds asif

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Kaede Rirunaru

Kaede Rirunaru

Surabaya, Indonesia
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