Broken Life Comments

Boy this is realy true. I love the sentiment. The poem, however, is rather broken in places and is not too smoothe. This makes it a difficult read and it loses some of its appeal because of it. I can't recommend it for that reason. It can be fixed and I'm sure it will be. As I said, I sure do love this message and it was clear, so it does get through. That's really the important thing. GW62

This is good work, I realy do like this piece.The pain comes through.10/10 grgards Tom

Sad poem, but very well put together! Thanks for sharing