Tuesday, February 14, 2006

Broken Legs Fell Comments

Rating: 4.5

Stuck to the cliché of life’s big test
Like a chick fallen from its nest
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Timmy Tubbs
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Elya Thorn 14 February 2006

I love the way it starts, the analogy with the chick which falls from its nest is great, very original, then you reveal the story, and the ending of the poem is WOW, I didn't expect that! Well done! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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