I love the way it starts, the analogy with the chick which falls from its nest is great, very original, then you reveal the story, and the ending of the poem is WOW, I didn't expect that!
Well done!
~~Elya Thorn~~
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I love the way it starts, the analogy with the chick which falls from its nest is great, very original, then you reveal the story, and the ending of the poem is WOW, I didn't expect that! Well done! ~~Elya Thorn~~