Broken Journey Comments

A touching poem, Saroj...10+++

For a piece of music we are here sir.

This poem of broken journey carries, expression, emotion, grief, joy, hope and courage. A starting of new breath of life is a great perspective hidden in this and readers get a broader message of sustainable life, sustainable development, freedom, proof of existence and strength of cooperation. I am very glad today reviewing such worthy poem. Every line in this poem has its unique feature. Movement of true freedom is ever needed in society.

Initiation of difficult time broke mind and soul. But for overcoming the smog all kept patience and walked around time. Having pious breath all tried to sustain with hope of new life and courage. Rising from every corner and leading like a successful ray of light they learnt. This poem is definitely and outstanding poem. You have very smoothly brought up expression. This poem deserves full 10 marks.

When anyone stars his journey initially he feels difficulty but gradually this becomes easier for him. The line of any of the finger may try to touch the sky but sky witnesses every actin as echo or in any form to give reaction being agent of nature. Sky helps in preventing evil actions. Sky tries to save the person and hence you describe this sky as redemptive. Continuous right approach brings success. Brothers of kiln factory burned by acid and this was so sad and thought provoking.