Monday, December 21, 2020

Broken Is My Tryst With Words Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some time I read an old poem,
Brought back to me by some
Poet friend's comment,
And wonder, did I write this! !
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Savita Tyagi
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Susan Williams 17 January 2021

Gave this 5 stars---I am constantly feeling startled by something that I wrote a while back--- a while can be a day---and think WoW or Ick... loved how you expressed yourself in this poem

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Bri Edwards 12 January 2021

Memory fades. It can be for the better or worse for us and those around us. A few years ago i started to put a container of milk into a cupboard for dishes. But, is THAT due to memory? Or was i just goofy? ? ? I think the meaning of last 4 lines escapes me. silvery beams? : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 12 January 2021

'And wonder, did I write this! ! ' I've had this happen to me.

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Captain Cur 07 January 2021

So true and insightful! But remember my dear poet, when one door closes two more swing open.

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The richness of the day And serenity of the night Imprisoned in the static silence Of a strange world.It's true in the case of people like us

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