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Broken In Two... Comments

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Broken in two
My heart
No longer whole
Now I need you
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Vi Lanflagle
june
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Random Crap 07 September 2007

This poem seems very randomly jotted down thoughts, which is a good start to awesome poetry. But personally i like to get a bit more organisation afterwards, maybe develop the ideas. Just a personaly suggestion, some people really like this sort of thing, and sometimes it works. All the best x-x-x

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Vi Lanflagle

Vi Lanflagle

Phoenix, AZ
Vi Lanflagle
Vi Lanflagle
Phoenix, AZ
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