Sunday, February 22, 2009

Broken In My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

pain drowns my heat
the song of sorrow plays over and over in my mind
blood drips from my arm
alone in my dark room
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

a great example of poetry.. u got the Shakespearean vibe going on here.. u amazing great job

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Aarif Ameen 06 April 2009

great in 16 only good luck

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Qendresa Ulaj 22 February 2009

i just hope u dont feel this way.. cuz its horrible... good job.. i like it a lot... :)

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