pain drowns my heat
the song of sorrow plays over and over in my mind
blood drips from my arm
alone in my dark room
                
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i just hope u dont feel this way.. cuz its horrible... good job.. i like it a lot... :)

 
                     
                
a great example of poetry.. u got the Shakespearean vibe going on here.. u amazing great job