Broken In Half Comments

ds is like wow...very dp

This was a very strong write... although I'm not one to judge; however you write poetry, is however you write. And the main reason why I like this poem, is how well I can relate to it. I've suffered, and still am, suffering from an unforgiving relationship... and I can tell that the same has happened to you. Recovery is difficult, but believe me, it's better off if you just move on. There's a lot of better people out there... something you thoroughly deserve C; . Thanks for the read.

I really liked this. It was intense and held great strength in each word that was said. I understand how you feel and how you can still love him after all that. The pain you wrote this with oozes with the love at the same time. A wonderful mix of emotions :) p.s soon you will learn to forget about this though i wont lie, it may never be completely erased. Thats just how life is: /

Very blunt and conscious of its visual effect. Pain and angst of broken heart, oddly written sentences but strong none the less.

Please don't do it... I will kiss the same skin and swear on this blood that pumps through my heart that there will not be another reason why you will not dropp that knife; I admit, it is I that is crule, please don't blame this World - it was made without fault. That is what I call, 'A touch on the core of passion'

Words make an impact