Monday, August 10, 2015

Broken, In Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tired of analysis,
Doors keep closing now,
Hope is out the window,
Planting, lost its plow,
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Sandra Feldman
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Ayman Parray 14 August 2015

Phenomenal poem I think mostly because of the way you write. You need to change the system of your country and every country for that matter. But still I think America is a beacon and the hope of the world, at least when it comes to free speech.

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Chuy Amante 11 August 2015

Oh my! You were feeling it! wonderful the tidal wave is coming I feel it in the air when all is dashed to pieces all cleansed we be this affair surf through it or go under it is a choice you surely know sit tight, avoid the plunder a new day coming, time to sew

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2015

Hope in window drops closing now. Very interesting poem shared really.

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