Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Broken Homes Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look around and all I see is confusion
People walking around with happy faces of illusion
Their hearts filled with emotion, but empty with love
Everyone unhappy, just calling the other persons bluff
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Renee Maritz
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White Tiger 27 February 2018

Amazing write Loved it. A 10+++

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Lyn Paul 29 September 2012

Hello Renee, I understand your poem, expressed well. Thank you and keep it up.

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