Broken Home Comments

very touching write. Sometimes it is wise to listen to the children.

when she had told her mother. her mother said it could never be why would he go with you when he has me? .................do many form of sexual abuses i hvae come across but this one horrifying.. one case i came across is of mother marrying son only for the sake of property... we have stooled so low.... i loved piece and wept for the plight....10 read mine... papa do you know.... papa yopu too... a place called home... molesation bid...smiley...o.mother

This is very moving, sorry tale sir.. I guess, the world has crumbled in to a sinful world, that these sorts of thhings do happen... W. B yeats in his poem Second Coming says! ! ! 'The darkness drops again but now I know That twenty centuries of stony sleep Were vexed to nightmare by a rocking cradle, And what rough beast, its hour come round at last, Slouches towards Bethlehem to be born? ' Poem ends with the note of Sphinix slouching towards the Bethlenhem.. He speaks of a rocking cradle.... lots of interptretations have been made regarding this poem, some say, the the cradle itself is rocking, because of the devil's or sphinix'x touch... I feel the when a child is born to this world, he comes as a very innocent being.. In that sense if his cradle is swinged by a devilish hand, i m sure the child will suffer from this effect... The girl you described in the poem, is blessed, in the sense that she seems to have chosen a correct path, cause many other would v gone ashtray.. This is very touching poem indeed.. And you know what, I dont like to think i m alone in this world too...... And when I travel around PH i dont feel alone.... nice write sir.. you kept the poignant aspect through out the poem.... well done....10 with love Shan

this is really A work of a talented child..a beautiful poem that is expressly well detailed..broken home always result to misunderstanding..is this a true story? oh my dear, i love you very much..don't ever make your life a miserable one like what happened in your previous life..make it as a lesson..be happy, i love you so much little darling...lg

Good work, Louis...very touchingly you have written this...i understand the real background of this poem...such unfortunate girls we meet every where in this nasty world...thanks a lot for sharing your feels...10

A very touching write.............an eye opener................

a true write for the current age....insighful......loved it.

Very touching. You give a voice to the lost and forsaken. Thank you for being an inspiration to so many on poemhunter. Warm regards, Sandra

this poem is very true, some people are animals no matter what age, i have suffered through abuse from my boyfriend who was only a year older than me. this is a strong poem and everyone ghould read it

Feeling pretty choked up over this one. Almost seems that you were a fly on the wall. Bottom line, what knocks you down, makes you stronger, I'm glad to see that your poems convey that. Another one that reaches the bottom of the soul. 10+++

Heart touching write is displayed by your poetic pen.

a sad write...some men are animals...and a child 's experience of incest from a near one is the highesr cruelty i feel...god were are you

this is sad. but it is reality. another good write.