Wednesday, January 17, 2007

Broken Hearts Eventually Mend Comments

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I'm so sick of love
And the pain it has caused.
I'm drowning in tears;
Will it ever stop?
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Elizabeth Sheaffer
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Not a member No 4 03 February 2007

You get your balance back eventually, just in time to be blown over again. Written from the heart. Good form and rhythm, and spare use of language. Quality writing.

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Joshua Fegley 17 January 2007

Keep fighting! ! ! Life and love are one of the same; at least for us chosen few anyway. Take care.

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Elizabeth Sheaffer

Elizabeth Sheaffer

Mt. Airy, NC
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