Saturday, July 1, 2006

Broken Hearts Comments

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Crying a river of tears
Since I talked to you
someone that I love
How could you say
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Grace Hays
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Jack Dylan 02 July 2006

If we could only say the things that really mattered, when it didn't feel like talking to the wall. I'm sure that wright this made you feel somewhat bette, and to that I say good for you. Some times our heartst scream, but our voices are silent. This is a great way to get to testing times in ones life. Best of luck! Remeber you never need to hold back here! release yourself of those painful moments and rejoice that you've spoken your mind. This is a muse I often find myself inspiring things that need to be said, so keep saying them. Keep of the great work.

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BEAU GOLDEN 01 July 2006

That was powerful. I feel it. Such pain poured out onto the page, like u poured it by the pitcherful.

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