Broken Hearted Comments

Dang! Your poor heart silently dying. You did some sad, painful writing. Dude! Do you know how clearly you captured pain and hurt? I want to say very nice, but it's full of pain and how nice is that? I'll just say very well written. You've organized this in a very relatable way. Deborah Cromer

well described emotion.....10

You have described th epain of losing someone so well here Jon, Crying in my cuppa, 10 Lynda xx

nycc poem! ! gr8! ! ..

words when emotionally written makes up a good poem, ..when a poem comes from heart and brain, absolutely the result is a perfect poem like this poem of urs my dear jon..this is nicely done..i go with carl harris, i will use the word 'tremendously written'...

A truly broken hearted poem, Jon. A deep seeded melancholy has been out poured.........10/10.

very touchy reflection my friend Jon! I would say its an amazing song of heart! 10+

extremely beautifully written jon 10

Boy, I know this feeling all to well, Jon, and have been there myself more times than I care to mention. This melancholy poem is tremendously well written and expressed. It is a very moving write and one which nearly all of us can relate to very well, having had similar experiences in life and love ourselves. Carl.