Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Broken Hearted Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here I sit Brokenhearted
Bought a dell and it departed
Bought a contract to have it serviced
All its done is make me nervous
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Brie Carter
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Karen Hernandez 29 January 2010

great peom i like your style in writting

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~ Jon London ~ 11 May 2009

Well thought out and (Del-ivered) piece.....nicely penned theme..with the added twist...great job

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Holli Rochelle 12 October 2008

Dell Is A Computer....Ha

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 October 2008

Teenage musings, I can understand.......too good for a young girl like u. keep writing.

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