Tuesday, February 20, 2018

Broken Heart [ Tanka ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

He left a small piece
Of his heart to patch the hole
And tattered fabric
Of her wounded broken heart
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 February 2018

Nudershada, sucha well-expressed poem...10++++

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Nice poem about broken heart

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 February 2018

A beautiful succinct write about love with vivid images. Well penned.

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Nudershada Cabanes

Nudershada Cabanes

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