I found a broken heart the other day
So torn it was, it took my breath away
The noise it made was palest ever pink
It’s beating just as but the weakest blink
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Val-today is my 89 birthday and I shall indulge myself with more of your excellant offerings, this one included. I love your sonnets
A lovely sympathetic poem for a broken heart. So good to rescue and held in the breast..... moved
A sonnet to break any heart Val. Your little songs go undiminished.
The heart was lucky you found it. And in reading your poem, so are we.
What a beautiful poem and gesture. You would do a charitable and tender thing like that. It is truly a sad and sweet poem al in one, . So well written and touching that you can feel the broken rhythm of the unfortunate heart.
With care and tender love it should be fed Every heart needs that love. You really rescued a heart. Thank you.
A Wonderful Sonnet. Very true said, a heart is a heart whether be of king, or pauper or a poet. Beautiful lines says it all..... A heart is still a heart, it must be said With care and tender love it should be fed....Loved reading each lines. Thanks for sharing with us.
The gesture of kindness shown was remarkable Valerie. As there are a few of us who can understand, sympathise and reciprocate, these broken hearts will beat again. A fine poem Val.
Love sonnetts. You do them justice, as in all your writtings.
A heart is still a heart, it must be said With care and tender love it should be fed made my day!
This is just lovely..... Val ! ! An adorable write! !