Friday, February 28, 2014

Broken Heart (Sonnet) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I found a broken heart the other day
So torn it was, it took my breath away
The noise it made was palest ever pink
It’s beating just as but the weakest blink
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Valerie Dohren
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Valsa George 12 March 2014

This is just lovely..... Val ! ! An adorable write! !

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Joseph Anderson 12 March 2014

Val-today is my 89 birthday and I shall indulge myself with more of your excellant offerings, this one included. I love your sonnets

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Ur mom 28 January 2022

r u alive

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Amitava Sur 11 March 2014

A lovely sympathetic poem for a broken heart. So good to rescue and held in the breast..... moved

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Dave Walker 07 March 2014

A beautiful and moving sonnet.

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John Brown 04 March 2014

Another beautiful poem Val.

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 03 March 2014

A sonnet to break any heart Val. Your little songs go undiminished.

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Terry M 01 March 2014

The heart was lucky you found it. And in reading your poem, so are we.

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Sandra Feldman 01 March 2014

What a beautiful poem and gesture. You would do a charitable and tender thing like that. It is truly a sad and sweet poem al in one, . So well written and touching that you can feel the broken rhythm of the unfortunate heart.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 February 2014

With care and tender love it should be fed Every heart needs that love. You really rescued a heart. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 February 2014

A Wonderful Sonnet. Very true said, a heart is a heart whether be of king, or pauper or a poet. Beautiful lines says it all..... A heart is still a heart, it must be said With care and tender love it should be fed....Loved reading each lines. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Dinesan Madathil 28 February 2014

The gesture of kindness shown was remarkable Valerie. As there are a few of us who can understand, sympathise and reciprocate, these broken hearts will beat again. A fine poem Val.

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Juan Olivarez 28 February 2014

Love sonnetts. You do them justice, as in all your writtings.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 28 February 2014

A heart is still a heart, it must be said With care and tender love it should be fed made my day!

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Eeshah Raaziah Naqavi 28 February 2014

Nice one :) you seem caring :)

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