Broken Heart Pieces Comments

Brilliant and motivational.

I enjoyed this poem. You show a deep empathy for your fellow man and their heartaches. Great poem. Nice work.

Broken Heart Pieces expresses a deep understanding of pain and suffering among humans no matter what age or state of life. Only Heaven can cure a broken heart. Nothing on earth can change the fact that if we live and love we will suffer broken heartness. This poet has a very promising future as a writer. For 11 yrs of age, she has a wonderful insight into human suffering. Dealing with the heart is a very difficult. She realizes that heart break is everywhere no matter the day, time, century or person. A worthy read.

Can't believe a 12 year ols girl can write like this

sweet poem meriam.. really impressive.. :)

grrrrtttt poem, meriam... it's so gud to know dat a grl of 12 yrs has dis much talent n dat too a malayali ...wow!

Brilliant theme. Keep it up.

Excellent. A different approach, end is very nice. Appreciating your imagination.

since love is universal, , , , :)

good poem, well made, some sentences can be shortened though......even i liked the ending

Meriam, it's a great poem! And good advice at the end... Look up to heaven, where else would our help come from?