Saturday, July 2, 2016

Broken Heart Bleeds Comments

Rating: 5.0

My soul in pit darkness, groped
You brought hope with candle light
Before you I became real, exposed
As soul mate you caressed my heart
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Paul Sebastian
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Heart really bleeds to read it, pain is overt, heart throbbing heartbreak, need to heal.....Thanks for the share poet

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Paul Sebastian 04 July 2016

Thanks for your comment and appreciation. Glad you felt it as I intended the poem to be. Written for all broken hearts.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 July 2016

In summer soul has the summer bath. Very wonderful composition is shared on really. Wise sharing.10

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Paul Sebastian 04 July 2016

Thank you so much for your comment and appreciation.

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Paul Sebastian 04 July 2016

Thank you for your comment and appreciation. Glad you liked the poem.

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