Monday, July 28, 2008

Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

you cant picture what woulde be,
If we would live in eternity,
I'm despratly in need,
of my mothers hand, in a welcome land,
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Scentless Apprentice
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Maria Isabel Oropeza 28 July 2008

wow. you really paint a motion picture with your words. great job. please check out some of my poetry. and i give your poem a 10. excellent job. Be Different. Be You. best of luck! Elizabeth

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