Friday, July 11, 2008

Broken Heart Comments

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broken into more pieces then one
what do i do
they tell me don't give up
but what do i do with a broken heart and a love for pain
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Courtney Caine
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Yeah, I do that alot. I noticed the word Pathetic is capitalized. That's kind of a main theme I'm getting here. But I don't think you're pathetic, I don't mean that. It just seems like you think you're pathetic, in this poem at least. But don't worry.

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