Broken Heart Comments

Simple lines Full of meanings

So very sad, you 've penned it nicely...Marianna Jo Arolin

I really liked this poem. It is fantastic. Keep it up! Peace out, Lexi Baby

Beautiful piece..... :)

Splendid piece. Reminds me a lyric in my mother tongue Telugu 'His heart was like a glass Hit by a stony hearted woman broke into shattered pieces, his blood flowed as tears' Not exactly like this...it has its own beauty akin to language. Please read my long poem BROKEN HEART and comment

This is a short but explicit piece of honesty. Very well put together.