Tuesday, May 27, 2008

Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

At night i feel the coldness, breathing down my spine
It didnt happen like a bullet, it happened over time
Slowly coming and going, it suddenly only went
like a heart at fault, it hurt, cracked, and bent
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Christopher Leone
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 06 June 2008

O yes, relationships can leave you that way. Good read my friend. Please check our my poem 'One Again' Blessings, Loyd

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Tyease Collins 30 May 2008

I definately know that feeling...like your love for that person just fades away... Nice poem... **Tyease**

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james w foulk 30 May 2008

a very good poem and i know the feeling, write on

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Stacy Bea 29 May 2008

Chris your a very good poet, lovely poem

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wow u have a real talent for writting poems. good job. keep going Chris.

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Clarissa Tobey 29 May 2008

sometimes you just need to talk and cry it out and say all the good and bad about the relationship

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Seema Chowdhury 28 May 2008

ooh no don't feel cracked and bent, life has ups anddownd. just learn to face them all and BE STRONG! !

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