I spread my heart before you
As serenades at your threshold
Straining every vein of mine
Into a tune of melodious love
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It is the first time tat my eyes caught ur profile of wonderful poems.. n this is the poem tat i first took a look.. oh man! ! ! ! ! ! u have penned it awesome... its so touchy.// i loved it... thanks for a heart touching poem...
Amazing imagery that is totally stunning and your perception and feel is eloquent as much as your style is. Thanks, arya
I thought this was a wonderful piece. I've read a lot of your writings, but I don't recall ever reading one as well written as this. I was able to cherish every word. So, I had to give it the score it deserves, a 10 . I am also going to list it among my favorites. A wonderful addition. I am thrilled at your success! GW62
inspiring verses to mend a broken heart...well written...lovely..
Dear Sathya, You have done a very good job. I really feel your poetic talent. But I do not like long poem. Do not try to say everything in poem. Keep opportunity for readers to think and feel.
You use very good imagery and I like the short lines.... very beautiful poem indeed! :)
WOW! Absolutely beautiful. I loved the contrast ans the dept of your conviction about a lasting and fulfilled relationship. Good read poet friend! Loyd
the waves that crash upon the beach will eventually wipe it all away......... very well written! ! -bleeding