Sunday, May 4, 2008

Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

I spread my heart before you
As serenades at your threshold
Straining every vein of mine
Into a tune of melodious love
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Sathya Narayana
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Carissa Mcbride 14 November 2008

the waves that crash upon the beach will eventually wipe it all away......... very well written! ! -bleeding

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Bhavani Mullaivendhan 01 November 2008

It is the first time tat my eyes caught ur profile of wonderful poems.. n this is the poem tat i first took a look.. oh man! ! ! ! ! ! u have penned it awesome... its so touchy.// i loved it... thanks for a heart touching poem...

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, aryaindia 29 August 2008

Amazing imagery that is totally stunning and your perception and feel is eloquent as much as your style is. Thanks, arya

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Greenwolfe 1962 29 August 2008

I thought this was a wonderful piece. I've read a lot of your writings, but I don't recall ever reading one as well written as this. I was able to cherish every word. So, I had to give it the score it deserves, a 10 . I am also going to list it among my favorites. A wonderful addition. I am thrilled at your success! GW62

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anne adam 23 August 2008

cool i like it.it's so nice

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I second Fulgencio.. touched me!

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Ency Bearis 05 August 2008

inspiring verses to mend a broken heart...well written...lovely..

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Aanchal Jain 02 August 2008

it wus vryy touchin ya.......

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Ershad Mazumder 17 July 2008

Dear Sathya, You have done a very good job. I really feel your poetic talent. But I do not like long poem. Do not try to say everything in poem. Keep opportunity for readers to think and feel.

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Jurietta Duraan 04 July 2008

You use very good imagery and I like the short lines.... very beautiful poem indeed! :)

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 26 June 2008

WOW! Absolutely beautiful. I loved the contrast ans the dept of your conviction about a lasting and fulfilled relationship. Good read poet friend! Loyd

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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