Thursday, April 10, 2008

Broken Heart Comments

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Before, I thought my heart could not break anymore.
I was wrong.
Now I wonder why it hasn't opened up and bled.
How much more pain will I have to endure before it stops?
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Greenwolfe 1962 27 September 2008

There is a bit more substance in here that was not present in the last piece . I reconnend it very much . GW62

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Aashish Ameya 10 April 2008

good poem....but pain is the second truth of life after death....we have live with it

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