Broken Heart............. Comments

wow...a heart that speaks... very lovely.... full of feelings... feelings of love...and assurance to someone you love... i love the thoughts and the lines... very realistic...love in pain...love in trials... i love this 10++++

this work speaks of truths a lot of people are going through, whether they want to admit it or not. good friend, friend. not a 10, but a 100000000000000

you put your soul into it... excellent

Awesome poem. I like it very much. I liked how you told us the good and bad moments, it tell us how imperfect life can be.

I can feel the emotion just poring out of this. excellent piece of work. I like it a lot.good job. Becca

nice poem like brittnay said kinda sad but its good comment some of mine if u dont mind

pretty good. that's sort of sad. but has a lot of meaning and that is what makes a good poem. brittany

'if a day comes when you couldn bear the pain they give you... just turn around n check .... i will be there with arms wide open awaiting for you...' hey Seby (can I call u thus) , another masterpiece from you +++++++10 regards anjali

'if a day comes whn yu couldn bear the pain thy give yu... jst turn around n check .... i will be there with arms wide open awaitin for yu...' very nice proclamation. Nice poem.