Thursday, January 17, 2008

Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 3.5

I wake up to your loving voice
Saying that you love me to the darkest hour
I say I love you more then you could ever know
I go to school see you kiss another
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Thomas Henderson
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Suicide King 17 January 2008

Wow, a very emotional poem, a lot of the use of pain and shadows to give the poem a dark feel of emotion. great job.

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