Broken Heart Comments

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. An insightful depiction of the intricacies of heartbreak. Thanks for sharing.

Very impressive write, Laya Bajpai. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Your whole body seems to have become turbulence itself Mind, heart, body everything rings with raging emotions You look for escape Peace from this smoldering volcano But alas! there is no peace to be had............//// wonderfully written; love this expression

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