Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Broken Heart Comments

Rating: ★4.8

A stillness so vast, so somber
like a blooming garden
frozen in sudden autumn sheen
all the splendor and grandeur
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Seema Jayaraman
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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2015

So vast stillness is wisely painted with beats of heart although this is broken. Visions of carefree laughter is wisely marked in this imagery drawn wisely. Fantastic composition of mixed verse of grief and joy.10

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Loke Kok Yee 08 November 2015

a sad but beautiful poem of love lost thanks-10

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Seema Jayaraman 08 November 2015

Glad you enjoyed Loke though a sad one..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2015

Feeling still a part and willing not to depart from moment of joy with each count to enjoy

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Seema Jayaraman 08 November 2015

Thank you, glad you enjoyed.

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Seema Jayaraman

Seema Jayaraman

Mumbai
Seema Jayaraman
Seema Jayaraman
Mumbai
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