Broken Heart Comments

now the true color of you is in front of me i will lock you with my brain key i never want to see you again in my life because your like knife........no one can betray my feelings.. i am totally determined. i will be myself. a very nice poem of determination and self will in a positive way. thank you dear poetess. tony

Closing eyes and loving the illusion both make wonderful imagery here in this poem really. Wonderful sharing.

i will never get influenced by you at any time because your bitter like lime i just love to be myself...A great statement of independence in all and every form. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.

Always be yourself, Yashika. And keep writing poetry.