Broken Heart Comments

A well narrated plight of blind love. well done Madam. I request you to read my poem in the same caption.

Oh, children can be so ungrateful. We give them love & they don't return it. A good poem

Old age is really tough for every other elderly individual, but this amount of hatred really makes my heart weak, not of the son but of the father, whatever the son could have done..a true story is true story.

A sad story Chandra, children can be so ungrateful, and parents are human too - forgiveness is an ideal which cannot always be effected.

in this mysterious world any thing can happen.....I did't think so, why happened many says...really a sad and pathetic story in this form..well penned......

A heart-rending short story in rhyme with a message for young generation.

A true story...A sad story...i wonder how difficult it is to bear it in a poem...what to say about reality! ! ! ! ! ! !

The story of this father is not singularly his own story, it is unfortunately the story of many a father and mother! After having drained the last drop of blood for one's children, when they face such cruel rejection, an aged and ailing heart is likely to be shattered into shards! ! Poignantly presented! May the ungrateful children open their eyes and percieve the light! !

father's heart, I like it. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.