Sunday, June 16, 2013

Broken Heart Comments

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Castigation it was
A grave offendous sin
To be wanted, to be loved,
To have a soul that felt
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Lucifera Santez
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 08 August 2013

But after the bad experiences come a new invigorating one. Never worry. And your words here are very fitting to every scene I see. Nice.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 July 2013

Great wording in this sad poem of your, very well penned dear. Siya_! !

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Zandile Zoya 22 July 2013

keep writting and i will keep on reading.

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Aldrich Suarez 19 June 2013

very delightful it was...at least you found out or she found out a new liar... :)

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Valerie Dohren 18 June 2013

Broken relationships are always very sad, especially when it is one-sided. But hearts can be mended in time. A lovely poem Lucifera.

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Gajanan Mishra 16 June 2013

good poem, thanks, with love. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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