Wednesday, July 25, 2018

Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

My aching heart
still shaken by my own words
that we should part
because continuing like this hurts
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Aqua Flower
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Carl Roussell 26 July 2018

Facing a failed love is painful and expressed so well in the lines: still shaken by my own words that we should part

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Aqua Flower 26 July 2018

Sometimes being alone is better than being unfulfilled. Thank you for replying.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 July 2018

Such a well expressed poem...10++++

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Aqua Flower 26 July 2018

Thank you, Benard!

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Robert Murray Smith 25 July 2018

A well penned write of insight.++10

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Aqua Flower 26 July 2018

Thank you, Robert. Being in love is the best feeling, love that cannot be revived is the worst.

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Rini Shibu 25 July 2018

An heartfelt poem, well written

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Aqua Flower 26 July 2018

thank you Rini!

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