Monday, August 13, 2012

Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

The leaves rustled
In the cold breeze
Around the stillness
Of the old Haunted House
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Kaila George
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Chinedu Dike 16 January 2015

A beautiful narrative poem albeit tragic, well penned. Good narrative poems are my favorite. It's a nice without of art. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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Kevin Patrick 23 August 2012

A truly heartfelt somber read, the storyline was captivating and truly romantic story of lost love, bittersweet as it reminds me of the story of Abelard and Heloise two people hopelessly infatuated that when they separate one cannot move on. Truly lovely

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