Broken Heart Comments
For the first time in a long time, it's hit me;
All the pain and heartache,
All the scars and scratches,
All the cuts and bruises,
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wow.............................these lines are so lovely.......its like you have written them using your heart.......its just so much beauty into it..great Job
Don't give up on love. the day will come, when you will finally meet the right person for you. This person will be the one who will never leave you. Don't stop writing. Your poems are really good.
worst thing ever to relize no love left to give or to accept something im currently going through but still trying :) beautiful poem ~Bella
Broken glass seems impossible to repair, but we can melt the pieces and make new piece, Broken heart cant easily fix like that, but it magically can mend by forgiveness and let it go for new life..keep moving..you will see that no hole left in your heart anymore..nice write Chrishtiana_Unwritten Soul
Chrishtiana, is such a hard one but you have to move on with life. But the most painful aspect of it is that is your first time on the train.
i love the repition in this poem it really ties the whole thing together good work :) -Amber
well i like it and it is what you feal its more than a good read its a heart in word form and even thow you are hurt all pple come from dirt so there for alot of love just wont work
raelly good.Nice to read and the concluding part is better. i like it very much dude...
that'z talent there, and some raw emotion. XC i know it hurts, but its the best art work in the world, the art of the hurting, downcast, and broken.
Well, you have nicely expressed your feeling here. But I like the conclusion part more than the starting part. Keep it up. Well done.
Awesome..... The line indicating that the thng should b a dream touched my heart.
wow...When I read the poam of miss reed, I could smell the odor of burning heart...gud poam. :)
pure amazement expressing ur deepest emotions through ur poetic talent beautiful i feel every word of this poem great 10+++
Really good. I love it. you convey the feelings of a broken heart very well. it's awesome.: P
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7/21/2025 3:03:23 PM # 1.0.0
I close my eyes and all i see is a pile of ash whare my heart used to be. I open my eyes to see black smoke surrounding me....... really strong and painful emotional outburst......there is something haunting in your poetry.......